--- a/doc/manual.docbook Thu Oct 15 09:26:19 2009 +0100
+++ b/doc/manual.docbook Thu Oct 15 10:24:50 2009 +0100
@@ -267,7 +267,8 @@
<caution>
The way these conditions work is subtle and can be counterintuitive. Unless
you need what they provide, ignore this section, stick to user and repo
-conditions, and then things are likely to work the way you would expect.
+conditions, and then things are likely to work the way you would expect. If
+you do need what they provide, read what follows very carefully.
</caution>
<para>
File and branch conditions are added to the conditions against which a rule
@@ -296,18 +297,20 @@
Whether to allow any access to a repository
</listitem>
<listitem>
-Whether to allow a changeset, which is on a some branch
-</listitem>
-<listitem>
-Whether to allow a changeset which changes a particular file
+Whether to allow a changeset
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>
When the first two of these decisions are being made, nothing is known
-about what files might be changed, and so all file and branch conditions
-automatically succeed for the purpose of such decisions. This means that
-doing tricky things with file conditions can have counterintuitive
-consequences:
+about any changsets that might be pushed, and so all file and branch
+conditions automatically succeed for the purpose of such decisions. For the
+third condition, every file changed in the changeset must be allowed by a
+<literal>write</literal> or <literal>init</literal> rule for the changeset
+to be allowed.
+</para>
+<para>
+This means that doing tricky things with file conditions can have
+counterintuitive consequences:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>