--- a/doc/manual.docbook	Wed Oct 14 16:42:49 2009 +0100
+++ b/doc/manual.docbook	Wed Oct 14 16:43:36 2009 +0100
@@ -13,20 +13,12 @@
 </para>
 <para>
 mercurial-server is software for Debian and Ubuntu systems which gives your
-developers remote read/write access to <link
+developers remote read/write access to centralized <link
 xlink:href="http://hg-scm.org/">Mercurial</link> repositories using SSH public
 key authentication; it provides convenient and fine-grained key management
 and access control.
 </para>
 <para>
-mercurial-server is the easiest and most secure way for several developers
-to have read/write access to a central repository, but that's not the only
-way for several people to work on the same project using Mercurial; you
-should be familiar with the <link
-xlink:href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/MultipleCommitters">other ways of
-handling multiple commiters</link> before deciding to use this.
-</para>
-<para>
 Though mercurial-server is currently targeted at Debian-based systems such
 as Ubuntu, other users have reported success getting it running on other
 Unix-based systems such as Red Hat. Running it on a non-Unix system such as